Above is the third draft of the Autumn Leaves script, just click on the images to get at bigger version, so you don't strain your eyes. I saw that many other people were starting to post their drafts upon their blogs, so I wanted to get in on the action and it close enough to the shoot. I plan on creating one more draft before the shoot. I am really pleased with this draft and this draft has remained unchanged so far for about two months. There are definitely things that needed to be changed, certain things about the scenes will change and the dialogue which is still a little bit clunky, but I imagine that the dialogue will change when given to the actors upon the set. What I will say is that there will be no drastic changes, just things that make the scenes better and cuts to the scenes for action and dialogue that is not needed at all. Please feel free to give me feedback upon the blog or whether you can, as it is nice to be told what I'm doing wrong as well as obviously what I am doing right.
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